i can't imagine this page with a heading or a quote and i didn't know where to it. i wanted the reader to open this page and have photos of their favourite artist that hey can cut out and have as a poster but i also wanted them to have knowledge of the artist in an informal way. the magazine is indie and i don't want it to be all serious and high like most fashion magazines with the language but i do want it to look high standard.
What has been a success? What looks good?
again the pictures were the most suessful in this page, the shoots are expressed with different facial moods showing the characters personality.
What impact has your research had on the outcome of your 1st draft?
What do you now need to do to improve your magazine?
again the pictures were the most suessful in this page, the shoots are expressed with different facial moods showing the characters personality.
What impact has your research had on the outcome of your 1st draft?
What do you now need to do to improve your magazine?
I love this. The layout is fantastic. It is exciting, edgy, original and carries a strong representation of the artist involved.
ReplyDeleteCouple of things:
Image is bent out of shape and I would make them all black and white.
There are spelling and grammar mistakes in the article (easy to solve).
Headline for the article?
Background to article page could be wicked. I like the background of the B and W images, could you get something a little grainy to match that? Play with some of the layer styles on that one.
This is my favourite page of yours and these little touches will have a big impact.